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"Zero-Wing isn't worth saving" - A previous reviewer.
And I completely agree with him/her. There are literally hundreds of side-scrolling games identical to ZW which have been released over the years. Yet you chose ZW because you felt there was a "seed" of story in there. I think that perhaps you chose ZW because the AYB thing was so popular, and a serious flash movie based on it would rally lots of interest in the project.
Admittedly, the final product (apart from the name) bears little or no resemblance to ZW.
The way you constantly advertised this in the forums were shameless, and that when this movie was finally released and turned out to be nothing short of mediocre is disappointing. The audio didn't fit with the animation, and drowned out any message/storyline you were trying to get through. Sound effects would have been far better.
All in all, a pretty mediocre movie. Unfortunate really, as it clearly seems you have genuine talent.